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Love of My Life

Postby wwechristina » Thu Nov 05, 2009 3:20 am

Hey everyone!! Myself and my friend Creatureofthenight14 are gonna write another one called Love of My Life. This story will consist of five to six chapters. Here is the first chapter. Enjoy!

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wwechristina: Donna
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Chapter 1:

Maria Garcia and Donna Marcus were best friends growing up. They loved each other as if they were sisters. They always say we are sisters but with different mothers. They grew up watching WWE, mainly because of their favorite superstar, The Undertaker. Every time Maria and Donna see Taker on TV, they go bananas. They scream their lungs out when they see him appear. Maria has a lot of respect and admiration for Taker, but Donna is in love with the man. She dreams about him all the time, imagining him being with her, going out on dates, spending their romantic nights together and so much more. Donna wants her dream to come true.

Donna: Undertaker is the greatest man I've ever seen!
Maria: Who are you telling!
Donna: All I want is to be with him. I can't stop thinking about him. I love him from afar but I want to love him up close and personal.
Maria: I know you do. Suddenly, a commerical came on for an autograph signing tomorrow afternoon and the Undertaker is gonna be there.
Maria: Donna, look!
Donna: What?
Maria: There's gonna be an autograph signing tomorrow and Undertaker is gonna be there!
Donna: We have to go!!! I want to see him so badly!!!
Maria: Tickets are still available, so I'm gonna call now so we can go.
Donna: Go do that!!!

Maria went to the phone to call ticketmaster. Five minutes later, Maria came to the living room with a big kool-aid smile on her face.

Maria: Donna, I did it!
Donna: You got the tickets?
Maria: Yes!!!!
Donna: AAAHHHHHH!!!!! I gonna see the Undertaker!!!!!!! I love you very much!!! They hugged each other.
Maria: I love you too. Now let's get some sleep because we have to leave early in the morning, get the tickets and then get on line to see the Deadman.
Donna: Yes Ma'am.
Maria: Good night, sweetie.
Donna: Good night, mi amiga.

Both girls headed off to sleep, so they can get ready for tomorrow's big encounter with The Phenom of the WWE.
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Re: Love of My Life

Postby Dead_Girl » Thu Nov 05, 2009 5:36 pm

Great story. I think that Donna will collapse by seeing the Deadman at the autograph signing! lol She's so fond of him... A bit like me :smt041
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Re: Love of My Life

Postby CreatureOfTheNight14 » Sat Nov 07, 2009 10:42 pm

Great first chapter. Before I start, I would just like to thank Dead_Girl for commenting on our stories. We both really appreciate it. Here is the second chapter:

Chapter 2:

Maria and Donna wait patiently in line for their long-awaited autograph session with The Undertaker. Donna was thinking of this day so much last night, she didn't get no sleep at all. Maria wore baggy camoflauge pants with chains hanging. She wore a black tank top and some vans to match. Donna wore a 'Big Evil' sweatshirt with some black baggy pants with chains hanging. She also wore vans to match. Maria's hair hung down to the middle of her back, but Donna's hair gracefully brushed past her shoulders. A few minutes later, they were the last people in line. Just as they were going to step up, a bodyguard stepped in front of them.

Bodyguard: Sorry ladies, but the autograph session ended a few minutes ago

Donna's smile dropped. She waited a long time for this moment and now the opportunity just flew out the window. Just then, Donna and Maria heard a voice that was all too recognizable.

Mark: Frank, go ahead. They're with me? Ladies, ladies. Please excuse him. He has quite the temper this early in the morning.

Frank grumbled and walked away, Mark and the girls snickering behind him. Mark turned to the ladies.

Mark: Pleased to meet you, ladies. What are your names?
Maria: I'm Maria Garcia and this is your number one fan, Donna Marcus.
Mark: Nice to meet you guys. I'm The Undertaker, but you can call me Mark. What would you like me to sign?

Donna shuffled in her purse and pulled out a few things: a WWE Magazine with Undertaker on the cover, Undertaker: This Is My Yard, WWE Undertaker Pendant, and her 'Big Evil' sweatshirt. Mark smiled as he signed the items, he was her type of woman. She had spunk.... he liked that.

Maria: Well, it was nice meeting you Mark. We are going to get out of your way.....
Mark: No, no. Stay. Would you ladies like to go out for brunch... lunch.... whatever the hell you wanna call it?

The girls laughed and nodded. He smiled.

Mark: Great. Let's go.

All three of them hopped into Mark's truck and headed out to the restaurant.
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Re: Love of My Life

Postby Dead_Girl » Sun Nov 08, 2009 2:58 pm

I comment your stories 'cause i like them, so it's nothing :smt006 Great chapter, keep writing, as always :smt005
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Re: Love of My Life

Postby wwechristina » Tue Nov 10, 2009 4:04 am

Excellent job on the second chapter. Here is the third chapter:

Chapter 3

Mark, Donna and Maria all headed to the Chinatown restaurant to have some chinese food. Maria was happy she met Mark, but Donna on the other hand was very excited. She couldn't believe everything that happened so far. She was in heaven. She wanted to tell him she loves him but she didn't know how. Donna doesn't want to humiliate herself in front of him, so she decided when the time is right, she'll tell him herself.

Mark: Ladies, did you have fun tonight?
Maria: Yes we did and I'm pretty sure Donna was screaming the whole time.
Donna: Maria!!!!
Maria: Well it's true.
Donna: I'm gonna get you!!!
Mark: Can I be the referee of this little catfight?
Both: Mark!!! They all started laughing. The waiter approached them and he took their orders. Mark ordered his favorite meal, steak with pork fried rice. Maria ordered chicken with broccoli, and Donna ordered her favorite, chicken wings with white rice. All three of them ate their foods like they haven't eaten for weeks. They were starving.
Mark: Man, I'm stuffed.
Maria: So am I.
Donna: Me too. Donna couldn't stop looking at Mark. His beautiful green eyes were the object of Donna's affection.
Mark: Donna?
Donna: Yeah?
Mark: You're alright?
Donna: Yeah, sorry. She snapped out of it, preventing herself from getting embarrassed.
Mark: Well, ladies, I'll pay for the food and we'll go back to the hotel.
Maria: No problem.
Donna: Alright.

All three of them left the restaurant and headed straight to the hotel. When they got there, the hotel receptionist told Mark and the girls there was only one room available. Mark and Maria told him that's fine, but according to Donna, she was freaking out. She didn't know how to handle the realization that she and Maria are gonna be in the same room with Mark. How in the world is she gonna deal with this dilemma? Let's just hope she can make it through the night.
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Re: Love of My Life

Postby Dead_Girl » Tue Nov 10, 2009 5:41 pm

Sleep in the same room with the deadman is the dream of ALL the fan-girl :smt004
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Re: Love of My Life

Postby takerluvi3 » Wed Nov 11, 2009 2:24 am

OH MY GOSH!!! keep on writing gurl PLEEEEEEEEEASE?????????? :smt006
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Re: Love of My Life

Postby CreatureOfTheNight14 » Thu Nov 12, 2009 5:12 pm

Awesome job on chapter three. Here is chapter four:


Chapter 4:

Donna couldn't believe that she will be in the same room as Mark. She was so excited, she couldn't hardly sleep. She hopped to the bathroom, showered, peed, and then got dressed for bed. She hopped in the bed and went to sleep. Maria was already asleep. Mark got out the shower and saw that both Maria and Donna was asleep. He smiled at Donna and walked over to her bed. He decided to take a risk. He bent down to give Donna a soft kiss on the lips. He walked over to his bed, letting darkness overtake him.

Middle Of The Night....

Donna kept on tossing and turning. She screamed a high pitch scream and sits up. Sweat beading all over her face and neck and tears rolling down her face. The high pitched scream had woke up Mark and Maria. They looked over and ran to Donna's bedside.

Maria: Donna, what's the matter? You had a nightmare, didn't you?

She nodded and started to cry. Maria sighed and hugged her best friend. Mark sighed, he hated to see this girl cry. Maria pulled away from her.

Maria: Mark, can you help her out the bed so I can change these bed sheets?
Mark: Okay.

Mark gently carried Donna over to his bed and sat down, setting her on his lap. Maria took the covers off the bed and put it in the dirty clothes hamper. She walked into the closet and grabbed some clean sheets. While she was doing that, Mark was trying to calm Donna down.

Mark: Donna, darlin', please stop crying. You are too pretty to cry.

She stopped crying a little bit and looked up at him. Tears rolled down her face and her hiccups remained. Mark soothingly rubbed her back, pulling her into his embrace. She sighed shakily as she closed her eyes, no one has ever been this nice to her before. She smiled to herself as she fell into a peaceful sleep. When Maria walked over, he saw that Donna fell asleep in Mark's lap.

Mark: She can sleep in my bed for the night. I don't mind.
Maria: Okay.

Mark carefully laid her on the bed and he laid beside her. Maria got in her bed and fell asleep instantly. Mark wrapped his arms around her waist and said, goodnight. He closed his eyes and fell into a peaceful sleep.
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Re: Love of My Life

Postby wwechristina » Sat Nov 14, 2009 6:09 am

Excellent job! Here is the fifth chapter:

Chapter 5

Donna woke up at 11:00 in the morning to go to the bathroom. Maria woke up five minutes later and she seen Donna sitting on the toliet seat, looking worried and scared.

Maria: Donna, what's wrong? Why were you screaming and crying last night?
Donna: Maria, I had a very terrifying nightmare, it involves Mark.
Maria: What happened? Tell me now before Mark wakes up.
Donna: Ok, I saw Mark being bloodied and bruised by a hitman. Then he shot him in the heart and I was so helpless because he tied me up on the chair. Oh Maria, it was horrible and looked so real. She started to cry. I love Mark with all my heart and I can't see him hurt or worse, dead. Please Maria, I can't let this nightmare come true.
Maria: Don't worry, Donna. It's not gonna come true. You and Mark are made for each other. Like you said, he's the love of your life. We will not let anything bad happen to him. Did you recognize the hitman?
Donna: No. That's the bad part. I don't even know who he is.
Maria: Alright. We'll find out soon enough. Do you want to tell Mark?
Donna: I'm not sure I can. It's gonna hurt him if I do.
Maria: Do you want me to tell him for you?
Donna: I don't know.
Maria: Donna, he's bound to find out sooner than later.
Donna: I know. I don't know what to do.
Maria: Don't worry, both of us will protect him, no matter what.
Donna: Thanks for the advice and pep talk. They hugged each other.

Both girls exited out the bathroom and was surprised to see Mark still sleeping.

Maria: Well, I guess he's not a morning person.
Donna: Tell me about it. They both started laughing.
Maria: I'm gonna go take a shower. You're gonna go in after I'm finished?
Donna: Yeah, I'll wait.
Maria: Alright.

While Maria went to go take a shower, Donna went back to the bed where Mark was still asleep. She thought about telling him about the nightmare she had, but she doesn't want to scare him. While Donna was thinking, she felt an arm creeped up around her waist and pulled her back onto the bed. When she looked up all she see was beautiful green, emerald eyes looking at her.

Mark:Good Morning, beautiful.
Donna: Good Morning, handsome. They kissed each other briefly.
Donna: Mark, there's something I have to tell you....
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Re: Love of My Life

Postby Phenom0511 » Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:55 am

omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep writing :smt003
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Re: Love of My Life

Postby Living_Dead_Girl » Sat Dec 12, 2009 11:58 am

WOW huns, great story! :smt006 :smt003 :ohyeah
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Re: Love of My Life

Postby TG007 » Mon Dec 21, 2009 7:46 am

dammit keep going...hehehehe i love this :ohyeah :ohyeah :ohyeah
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Re: Love of My Life

Postby wwechristina » Wed Dec 23, 2009 10:33 pm

Hey guys!! It has been a while since I've posted the story. Here is the sixth and final chapter.

Chapter 6

Mark was looking at Donna, he didn't like the look of Donna's face.

Mark: Donna, what's wrong?
Donna: Mark.... she paused briefly. I've had a very terrifying nightmare last night.
Mark: What happened?
Donna: It involved you, me and a very mysterious hit man.
Mark: What else? Mark started getting a little nervous. Donna started to cry.
Donna: The hit man was beating you up very badly, you was bloodied and bruised. The hit man tied me up on the chair and he....
Mark: He did what Donna? Tell me!!
Donna: He shot you in the heart, killing you. I felt so helpless. It was so horrible!!! Donna start to cry uncontrollably.
Mark: Donna, nothing bad is gonna happen to us. I won't let that happen. I love you very much and I swear to God if this hit man even decides to mess with me, he'll be dead before he'll know it.
Donna: I know, Mark, but I'm very afraid. I've been in love with you the longest time and I don't want to lose you.
Mark: Don't be afraid Donna, I'll always be there for you. I love you.
Donna: I love you too, Mark, with all of my heart. They kissed each other for the longest time, until they heard a little laugh from Maria.
Donna: Maria!!!
Maria: Keep going, I might learn something when I have a boyfriend. Donna threw the pillow at her and started laughing.
Mark: I'm hungry, let's get something to eat before we get to the arena.
Donna: Mark, you're always hungry. Mark started laughing.

Donna went next into the shower, then Mark went in afterwards. All three of them decided to walk to the nearby restaurant. There was a short cut near an alley, that way they could get there faster. All of a sudden the masked hit man Donna was talking about appear out of nowhere and attacked Mark from behind. The girls saw this and were very scared, especially Donna. She went to the hit man and smacked him in the face. Realizing what she did, Donna was very nervous and decided to hit him again, but the hit man backhanded her in the face, leaving her side of her face red. Maria went to Donna and tried to help her up. The hit man went back to attacking Mark but Mark hit him in the groin and he punched him in the face. Mark sat up like the Undertaker does in the ring, and proceeded to attack the hit man with everything he's got. All of a sudden the hit man pulled out a gun and wanted to shoot Mark but Donna screamed at him, which distracted him and Mark took the opportunity to kick the gun out of his hands and grabbed him by the throat. He chokeslammed him on the cold, hard ground. He picked up the gun and wanted to shoot him, but he decided to unmask the hit man. It turns out the hit man was his arch nemesis: Edge. Upon this exchange, Donna and Maria looked at the hit man in shock and disbelief. Mark knew Edge was after him ever since he won the World title last year. Mark was questioning himself, whether or not he should shoot Edge or let him live. Mark decided to do the right thing and called the cops. Within twenty minutes, the cops arrived and took Edge and charged him with murder and sentenced him to life in prison.

Mark: Donna, are you okay?
Donna: Yes, I'm okay. That was the hit man I was talking to you about earlier today.
Maria: What a bastard!!! I hope he rots in jail.
Mark: He's gonna be in jail for life. Now we can move on with our lives.
Donna: I'm so happy. Now we can be together and no one will ever get in the way.
Mark: That's the Donna I know and love. All three of them hugged each other.

All three of them were happy to move on and leave the past behind them, especially Mark and Donna.

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Re: Love of My Life

Postby TG007 » Thu Dec 24, 2009 12:13 am

edge?...haha
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