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The Past Returns To Haunt Me

Postby CreatureOfTheNight14 » Sun Oct 25, 2009 2:35 am

Hey guys. Me, CreatureOfTheNight14 (Alice) and wwechristina (Trinity) are writing this new story for you guys. This story will consist of 8 chapters. Enjoy.

Alice Gavin is a young and shy 25 year old woman. She was born to Frida and Albert Gavin in the southern depths of Houston, TX. She was an only child, no brothers and no sisters. It was only her and her parents. At the age of 5, her mother was killed in front of her while they were walking to the store. Alice was traumatized as a child and as a result, she didn't talk. After the death of her mother, Albert turned to drugs and alcohol to calm his nerves. As a result of that, he became abusive towards Alice. At age 10, Albert beat Alice severely that Alice had to undergo surgery. Albert was sent to jail, but escaped. When he found Alice, he kidnapped her and wasn't seen again. Albert beat Alice, day by day by day. One day, Albert raped her. He was arrested and charged with rape and abuse. When he was put into prison, Alice was put into a foster home. She went out into the dark and cold world on her own at age 25. As she comes up into the world, she still relives the terrible childhood she had as a child. Alice is a huge fan of WWE. She watched it with her mother when she was little. She grew up watching one WWE Superstar in particular, The Undertaker. When she felt sad or lonely, she just turned on the television and started to watch Undertaker wrestle. Just seeing him wrestle makes her feel better. She longs to meet him one day, but she doesn't think it will happen. But that long awaited plea will come sooner than she thinks.
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Re: The Past Returns To Haunt Me

Postby wwechristina » Sun Oct 25, 2009 4:09 am

Great job to the summary. I'll start with the first chapter.

Chapter 1

Alice: Hello?
Trinity: Hi, Alice. How are you doing?
Alice: Hey Trinity. I'm doing okay, trying to move on with my life.
Trinity: Alice you have to try to forget about the past and focus on the present and future.
Alice: Easy for you to say. You never had a troubled and abusive childhood.
Trinity: Look, I understand what you went through but I want you to be happy and free from the past.
Alice: I know you do, but I can't help it. My past always returns to haunt me. I don't want this to happen to me anymore.
Trinity: I know sweetie. Hey, are you gonna watch Smackdown tonight?
Alice: Yes I am, for one purpose, to see the Undertaker
Trinity: Wow, I didn't know you like the Undertaker.
Alice: Are you kidding me? When I was younger, I watched the WWE and he is the only superstar I cheer on every time I see him. He makes all the sadness I have in my heart go away.
Trinity: Have you thought about meeting him in person?
Alice: All the time, but it will never happen.
Trinity: Never say never my friend.
Alice: What do you mean by that?
Trinity: Never mind what I said. It's almost time. I'm gonna let you go so you can see the man that can make you scream.
Alice: Shut up! They both starting laughing.
Trinity: See I knew I can cheer you up.
Alice: I know. It's amazing that we only met 2 months ago and we became very good friends.
Trinity: That's because we have so much in common and we always look out for each other.
Alice: I just wanted to say thank you.
Trinity: You don't have to thank me. I'm coming over tomorrow so we can talk more about the Undertaker.
Alice: Okay, I'll see you tomorrow. Have a good night.
Trinity: You too. Good night.

The next day, Trinity went over to Alice's house with a very special surprise in store for Alice. Alice said that meeting the Undertaker was not going to happen but Trinity had a very different opinion on the topic. What Alice doesn't know is Trinity got two front row tickets to see Smackdown with backstage passes. Trinity thought to herself, "She's in for the shock of her life."
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Re: The Past Returns To Haunt Me

Postby Dead_Girl » Sun Oct 25, 2009 9:12 am

Great first chapter, keep writing! :smt006
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Re: The Past Returns To Haunt Me

Postby CreatureOfTheNight14 » Sun Oct 25, 2009 7:24 pm

Awesome first chapter. Here is the second one:
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Alice woke up to a banging sound on her door.

"Just a minute," she yelled. She put on a top and a pair of sweats and walked to the door. She opened the door and Trinity appeared.

"Hey, come on in," Alice said. Trinity smiled and walked inside, sitting on the couch. Alice sat beside her.

"What are you smiling about," Alice asked. Trinity looked at her.

"Oh nothing....," Trinity said. She went into her purse and grabbed 2 tickets/backstage passes.

"Trinity... those aren't what I think they are," Alice said. Trinity smiled and nodded.

"These are 2 tickets and backstage passes to Friday Night SmackDown,. After the show, we're going backstage to meet the one and only.... UNDERTAKER!!!!"

Alice screamed and pulled Trinity into a tight hug. She pulled away and grabbed a ticket and backstage pass.

"So when is the show going to start?"

Trinity checked her watch.

"In a few hours.... we got time."

Alice nodded and smiled, sitting back into her seat. I finally get to meet The Undertaker, she thought. This is the best day of my life. Suddenly, the phone rang.

"I'll get it," Alice said. She got up and walked over to the phone.

"Hello?"
"Hi, this is Dr. Taylor... is this Alice?"
"Yes, this is her."
"Hey Alice. I received your test results and it came out positive. You are expecting a baby."

Alice stood there, tears in her eyes. Since the incident with Albert, Alice thought that she was possibly pregnant. So. she took a test. She didn't think it would come out positive, but it did.

"Ms. Alice?"
"Huh? Oh, I'm here."
"Okay. I would like you to come about 3 to 5 months from now so we can find out the sex of this baby. Again, congrats."

Alice hung up the phone and started crying, she wasn't planning to have a baby this soon. Trinity heard her crying and walked to her.

"Alice, what's wrong," Trinity asked, worried evident in her voice.
"That was Dr. Taylor, she got my test results...," Alice started.
"And......."
"I'm pregnant," Alice cried.

Trinity gasped. She knew about the incident with Albert and Alice. But, she was absolutely surprised at this news. She couldn't believe it.
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SmackDown......

Alice's stomach got a little bigger in just a few hours. Alice and Trinity had just arrived at the AllState Arena in Chicago, Illinois. They sat in their front-row seats and waited in anticipation. A few minutes later, the show started.

"Welcome to Friday Night SmackDown!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

The fans cheered as the pyros went off. Trinity was screaming her head off. Alice was sitting there, in her seat, looking sad and tired. Suddenly, a bell tolled. Soon, The Undertaker walked out. Alice hopped out her seat, cheering for Undertaker. He walked slowly down the ramp. He went inside the ring to meet his opponent, CM Punk.

After SmackDown.....

Alice and Trinity walked backstage. They walked up to a security guard.

"Passes, please."

They showed the guard the passes. He looked at the passes and let the ladies through. Alice and Trinity walked to a group of girls who were circled around Undertaker. He looked up and locked eyes with Alice. They stood there looking at each other. Then, the crowd faded away. Alice and Trinity walked up to Undertaker.

"Hello, ladies."
"Hi. I'm Trinity and this is your number one fan, Alice," Trinity said.
"Hey Alice."
"Hello, Undertaker."

Alice couldn't believe how calm her voice sounded. She was calm on the outside but she was shaking like a leaf on the inside.

"Hey ladies. Would you like to go out to eat with me," Undertaker asked,

The girls gasped and nodded. Undertaker made a heartwarming smile.

"Great. Come in, relax. Make yourself at home while I take a shower and change," he said. The three walked inside Undertaker's locker room.
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Re: The Past Returns To Haunt Me

Postby wwechristina » Sun Oct 25, 2009 11:25 pm

The second chapter was great. Here's the third chapter

Chapter 3

Alice and Trinity were waiting inside the Undertaker's locker room. Alice couldn't believe what happen over the past few hours, she found out she was pregnant, went to a Smackdown event with Trinity, and finally meeting the Undertaker.

Alice: Trinity, I want to thank you for making this moment happen.
Trinity: You don't have to thank me. I wanted to make your dream come true.
Alice: You did. They hugged each other. Alice spoke again.
Alice: Trinity, what am I gonna do about the baby? What if Taker finds out I'm pregnant? I don't want him to freak out about this.
Trinity: That's completely up to you. Besides, sometime sooner than later, you're gonna have to tell him about the past.
Alice: I can't!
Trinity: Why not?
Alice: I just can't! If I do, I'm afraid he's gonna leave me.
Trinity: You don't know that. To be honest with you, I don't think Taker is the kind of man to do that to anyone.
Alice: Well, I just don't know what to do. I just want to find someone who'll love me for who I am and to take care of me.
Trinity: I think Taker is the one for you.
Alice: TRINITY!!!
Trinity: I'm serious!! You and him will make a great couple.
Alice: Really?
Trinity: If I was lying, my nose would be growing like the little wooden boy Pinocchio. The girls started laughing.
Alice: Taker's almost done taking a shower. Remember, don't say anything about what I told you.
Trinity: I won't, but if I have to tell him, I'll do it.
Alice: I want to tell him but when I'm ready.
Trinity: Okay. Taker finished his shower and started getting ready.
Taker: Hey ladies, are you ready to get something to eat?
Both: Yes we are!!!
Taker: Let's hit the road. All three of them left.
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Re: The Past Returns To Haunt Me

Postby Dead_Girl » Mon Oct 26, 2009 2:18 pm

Wow, great job! :smt006 I really want to know what 'taker will say for the baby. keep writing!
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Re: The Past Returns To Haunt Me

Postby CreatureOfTheNight14 » Wed Oct 28, 2009 1:18 pm

Awesome third chapter. Here is the fourth one:
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Mark, Trinity, and Alice headed out to the restaurant, Steak N' Shale. It wasn't fancy. Mark wasn't that kind of a fancy person to get all dressed up, but he did if he had to dress up. They pulled up in the parking lot and hopped out Mark's black SUV. They all walked inside. Mark held the door for the two girls, then closed it behind him. Mark walked up to a table next to a window and pulled out Alice's seat. She smiled at him and sat in it. He then pulled out Trinity's seat and she sits in her chair. A waiter came rollling to their table.

Waiter: Welcome to Steak N' Shake. My name is Elaine and I'll be your waiter, what can I get you?
Mark: Orange soda.
Trinity: Same thing he's having.
Alice: Water.

Waiter: Okay. Your drinks will be out in a minute.

The waiter rollerskated to the back to prepare their drinks. A wave of nauceousness swept over Alice. She got up and ran outside. Trinity sighed, it would be only a matter of time before Mark finds out she's pregnant.

Mark: Let me check on her. You stay here and wait for our drinks.

Trinity nodded as Mark walked outside to check on Alice. He looked over and saw her getting sick in a garbage can. He sighed, poor girl. He walked up behind her and pulled her hair back, rubbing her back. When she finished, she sat on the side of the curb and began to cry in her hands.

Mark: What's the matter?
Alice: You probably want to leave me right? Just go on, leave like the others.
Mark: Alice, I'm not going to leave you. Why are you saying that?

She looked at him and stood up. Mark finally knew what she was talking about. He looked down and saw that she was pregnant. He looked up at her with a shy smile.

Mark: You're pregnant?
Alice: Yeah......

She looked down and sighed, kicking the dirt. Mark lifted her chin so he can look into her brown eyes.

Mark: I'm not going to leave you just because you're pregnant.
Alice: You aren't?
Mark: Hell no. How far along are you?
Alice: 3 months.

He smiled as he put a hand on her tummy and felt the babky kick. She looked up into his eyes and smiled. He smiled back at her.

Mark: Well, let's get inside. You got to eat for two.

He grabbed her hand and walked back inside with her in the restaurant. They all talked and ate their food. Alice was just sitting there, looking out the window and thinking about her unborn baby.

Trinity: Something wrong?
Alice: Nothing.
Mark: Something is wrong.
Alice: I just want to go home. I'm not feeling too well.

Mark looked at Alice and nodded. He turned to her.
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Re: The Past Returns To Haunt Me

Postby wwechristina » Thu Oct 29, 2009 12:32 am

Great job on the fourth chapter. Here is the fifth chapter:

Chapter 5

Mark paid for everything and all three of them left to take Alice home. While Mark was driving, Alice was in a lot of pain.

Alice: Mark, I don't feel very well. Before Mark started to speak, Alice passed out and slumped on her seat.
Trinity: Alice!!! Alice, wake up!!! Mark, take her to the hosptal, ASAP!!!!
Mark: I'm on it!!!

Mark sped up his car as fast as he could so they get to the hospital. They made it over there in record time. Mark carried Alice and Trinity followed him. The doctors took Alice and told Mark and Trinity to wait until further notice.

Trinity: I hope Alice is okay.
Mark: Don't worry, she's gonna be fine.
Trinity: Mark, she has been through so much all of her life. I can't stand seeing her in pain anymore.
Mark: What do you mean?
Trinity: I really want to tell you but I promised her I wouldn't tell anyone about what she's been through.
Mark: Why won't you tell me?
Trinity: Because I want Alice to tell you herself.
Mark: When is she gonna tell me?
Trinity: She'll tell you when she's ready.
Mark: Okay, when the time comes, I will listen to what she has to say and trust me, I will be there for her. I would never leave her. I told her myself.
Trinity: You did?
Mark: Yes. Trinity smiled at him because she knew deep down Mark and Alice would be the perfect couple.
Trinity: Mark, I want to thank you for being there for my friend.
Mark: I'll always be there for her.

Half an hour later, Dr. Martinez came out and told Mark and Trinity the update on Alice.....
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Postby Dead_Girl » Thu Oct 29, 2009 11:51 am

I really hope Alice is ok. Can't wait for more. :smt006
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Postby CreatureOfTheNight14 » Thu Oct 29, 2009 5:58 pm

Great job on the fifth chapter. Here is the sixth one:

Half an hour later, Dr. Martinez came out and told Mark and Trinity the update on Alice.

Mark: How is she, doc?

Dr. Martinez sighed.

Dr. Marinez: She is doing fine. We tried to save the baby, but there was nothing we could do. I'm sorry.
Mark: Does Alice know?
Dr. Martinez: No, she doesn't. She asking for you two. Follow me.

Dr. Martinez guided Mark and Trinity to Alice's hospital room. When the doctor got there, she opened the door. Mark and Trinity stepped in and sighed a breath of relief. Alice was laying on hre bed, watching UFC. She looked over and smiled at Mark and Trinity. Mark and Trinity walked over to her, grabbing one of her hands and standing at either one of her sides.

Mark: Hey.
Alice: (weakly) Hi.
Trinity: How ya feelin'?
Alice: A little better. How's the baby?

Trinity sighed and looked up at Mark. He looked at Trinity and sighed. He looked down at Alice with a sad expression on his face.

Alice: Mark, what's wrong?
Mark: The doctors tried everything to save the baby, but it was too late. I'm sorry.

Alice looked at Trinity, then Mark with tears streaking down her face. She put her face in her hands and began to cry. Mark sighed and pulled her into his lap, giving her some comfort. Trinity nodded and walked out the room, giving Mark and Alice some alone time. About 30 minutes later, Alice pulled away.

Alice: I'm s-sorry.

Mark shook his head, she didn't even cry pretty. He grabbed a piece of tissue and held it out to her.

Mark: There's nothing to be sorry about. Blow.

She blew her nose and Mark threw the tissue away. She sighed shakily as she laid her head on his shoulder. He rubbed her back, trying to calm her down. He sighed, maybe it's time I tell her. He pulled her away from him and sat her on his lap so that she was facing him. He was quiet for a moment and said.....

Mark: I love you.

Alice gasped, she wasn't expecting this. She started crying again.

Mark: Now, now. Why the tears?
Alice: No one ever told me that before.

He sighed, his heart broke for Alice. She has been through so much, beng this young. He smiled as he rubbed his finger on her cheek.

Mark: Well, I'm telling you now.

Out of the blue, Mark kissed Alice on the lips. She was shocked at first, but reacted. Mark's hands slid down to her waist. Alice's hands wrapped around his neck. They kept on kissing then pulled away.

Alice: So, does this mean that we are together?
Mark: Yes it does.
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Mark woke up and groaned, it's 12:00 at night. Why is he waking up this early? He looked over and saw Alice. She had on a black neglegee and was looking outside. Her jet, black hair went past her shoulders. She looked beautiful to Mark. He frowned when he saw a tear roll down her face. He walked over to her, sitting her between his legs. He wrapped his arms around her waist. He put his chin on her shoulder and said,

Mark: Penny for ya thought?

She looked up at him and sighed, looking back out the window.

Mark: Alright. What's up, darlin'?
Alice: Thinking.....
Mark: About?
Alice: The past, I guess.

Mark sat her on his leg and looked into her ocean blue eyes.

Mark: Would you care to share?

She nodded and sighed. She sat there, quiet for a moment. She opened her mouth and said......
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Postby wwechristina » Fri Oct 30, 2009 12:56 am

Great work on the sixth chapter. I would like to thank Dead_Girl for commenting on our story. Here is chapter seven:

Chapter 7

Alice: Mark, When I was five years old, my mother was killed in front of me while we were walking to the store. It was the most traumatizing moment of my life. After my mother was killed, my father, Albert went to drugs and alcohol to soothe his depression and his nerves. Around that time, he started to be abusive towards me. When I was ten, Albert beat me up so severely that I needed surgery. The police found him and sent him to jail, but he escaped, trying to look for me. He found me and raped me. The police found him and charged him with rape and assult. After he was sent to prison, I was sent to a foster home. I grew up into the world of hurt and heartache.

Mark was sitting next to her taking it all in. His heart was breaking because of all the abuse Alice went through when she was a child and she grew up living in the past. All he wanted to do was to hold her, comfort her, and love her with all his heart and make sure Alice will forget about the past and move on to the future.

Mark: Alice, I want you to know that I will always be by your side, no matter what. Hell, if your father was standing in front of me right now, I would've killed him with my bare hands.
Alice: Mark...
Mark: Baby, let me finish. When I first met you, I knew for a fact you are the one for me. Alice, I know you went through so much with the abuse and the loss of your baby, but through it all, you're gonna make it through and you'll be a stronger person. I love you and I'll always be there for you.
Alice: I love you too and I want us to spend the rest of our lives together.
Mark: I want that more than anything else in the world. They kissed each other passionately. Trinity walked in.
Trinity: Whoops!! I walked in on a very good moment.
Alice: Yeah, you did. They all started laughing.
Trinity: I see you're feeling better, Alice. Did you tell him everything?
Alice: Yes I did and now I feel like I can move on with my life as long as the past doesn't haunt me anymore.
Trinity: That's the spirit, my friend. They both hugged each other.
Mark: Hey, I hate to break up this little love fest but we gotta get some sleep.
Trinity: You're right. Well I see you guys tomorrow. Good night lovebirds!
Mark and Alice: TRINITY!!!
Trinity: Hahaha. I just like to joke around with you guys.
Alice: We know, we know. Good night, Trinity
Trinity: Good night my friend.
Mark: Good night Trinity.
Trinity: Good night Mark.

They all went to sleep in record time. Alice felt so much better after revealing her past to Mark. She felt like the weight of the past has been lifted right off her shoulders.
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Postby Dead_Girl » Fri Oct 30, 2009 3:14 pm

That's so great Alice told to Mark about her past. Did you ever try to write a funny fiction?
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Re: The Past Returns To Haunt Me

Postby CreatureOfTheNight14 » Sun Nov 01, 2009 2:52 pm

Awesome chapter seven. I would also like to thank Dead_Girl for commenting on our story. Here is the final chapter:

Chapter 8:

Mark woke up the next morning to coughing and crying. He got out of bed and pulled on a pair of sweats. When he walked inside the bathroom, his heart broke into a million pieces. Alice was hunched over the toliet, throwing up. Mark pulled her hair back and began to rub her backm softly. About an hour later, Alice was done. She flushed the toilet and sat back down. She was paler than before and her skin was cold and clammy. Mark looked at her and shook his head, she didn't look too good at all. He hated to see his girl in a state like this. He grabbed a damp cloth and wiped her face with it. After that, he carried her out the bathroom and went downstairs into the living room. Mark wrapped her up in a blanket and went into the kitchen to fix her something to eat. Alice sighed shakily, she didn't know what was wrong. She was feeling fine yesterday, now she feels like a trainwreck. What the hell is wrong with me, Alice thought to herself. Se shrugged and sighed. She stretched out on the couch and closed her eyes, falling into a deep sleep.

When Mark walked back into the living room, he smiled. Alice had fallen asleep. He lifted her head up and put it on his lap. He rubbed her head fondly and turned on the television. A few minutes later, Alice woke up to Mark shaking her.

Mark: Wakey, wakey, darlin'.

He smiled at her. Alice looked so innocent when she rubs her eyes, first thing in the morning. She looked so damn cute to Mark and he couldn't help but grin at her.

Mark: Welcome back.
Alice: I didn't go nowhere, you big goofball. I was having my beauty rest, and you disturbed it.

He laughed and shook his head.

Mark: Do you feel any better?
Alice: A little. I still feel a little nauceous, though.
Mark: Do you want anything to eat, hun?
Alice: No. I wanna sleep.

He nodded and stood up, placing her head on a pillow. He bent down to kiss her on the lips. He stood back up.

Mark: If you need anything, just call me. I'm a call away.

She laughed weakly and shook her head, Mark will be Mark. She closed her eyes and fell into a peaceful sleep.
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Alice woke up and walked to the bathroom. She went into the cabinet and found the pregnancy test. She took it out and stood there, looking at it. Mark walked in and she hid it behind her back.

Alice: Oh... h-hi.
Mark: What is that?
Alice: What? I don't know what on earth you are talking about?
Mark: What is it?
Alice: I don't have anything.

Mark gave her a look that said 'you really think you can trick me'. He reached over her back and grabbed it. Alice pouted, folding her arms to her chest. Mark read the box and then looked at her, all out of seriousnees in his face.

Mark: Why didn't you tell me you thought you were pregnant?
Alice: *looking down* I thought that you would be mad at me and hurt me again.

She looked down as she began to cry. Mark sighed and pulled her into his embrace, hugging her tight.

Mark: Darlin', I wll never hurt you and nothing gonna change that and I would not be mad at you, if you were or if you weren't pregnant. Take the test and let me know the results.
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Alice looked at the test and smiled. She was pregnant. 100% positive. She smiled and jumped up and down. She grabbed the test and walked into Mark's office. He was watching Sports on his FlatScreen PlasmaTV. Mark looked up and saw the look on Alice's face.

Mark: Well..... what does it say?
Alice: Look for yourself.

Mark took the pregnancy test and looked at it. Pink means Positive and Blue means Negative. It had a pink line. Mark couldn't believe it. He is going to become a father. He just sat there looking at it. His eyes filled with tears of joy.

Alice: Mark? You okay?

He stood up and walked toward Alice. She stepped back until she reached the wall. Mark looked at her intently. He bent down and kissed her hard and passionately at the same time. He picked her up and spinned her around.

Mark: I'm going to be a father. I can't believe this!

He bent down and put his hand on her tummy. He looked at her, a tear rolling down his face. Alice saw it and wiped it off his face and kissed him.

Mark: Is it a boy or girl?
Alice: It said pink, right?
Mark: Yeah, so it's...... a girl.

She nodded. Mark smiled and kissed her tummy. She laughed.
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Alice walked inside the door and closed it. Mark smiled and turned on some music. He walked out and grabbed her.

Mark: May I have this dance?
Alice: Yes you can.

Mark and Alice was dancing for a hour and a half. Then, Alice felt a pop and liquid trickling down her leg uncontrollably. She looked at Mark, tears streaming down her face.

Mark: What's wrong, darlin'?
Alice: My water broke.

He looked down and saw liquid all over the floor. He cursed underneath his breath and carried her out to the truck, speeding to the hospital.
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Epilogue: Mark and Alice got married at Mark's ranch. Alice gave birth to a adorable baby girl name Annabelle Clarissa Calaway. Mark gave the baby that name. A few years later, Alice gave birth to twin girls, Faith and Kate Calaway. They all lived happily ever after.
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Re: The Past Returns To Haunt Me

Postby Dead_Girl » Sun Nov 01, 2009 3:12 pm

To see 'Taker dancing will be fun :smt003 . great story!! i like it!
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Re: The Past Returns To Haunt Me

Postby wwechristina » Tue Nov 03, 2009 3:32 am

Great ending to our story my friend!!! :smt003
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